Thesis, development plan, and topic sentences.

THESIS: Standard Army units surpass private military contractors in accountability, equipment, and standards.


1.PMCs lack accountability in their performance and actions.
2.PMCs lack standardized equipment and proper vehicles.
3.PMCs have poor standards of recruitment and varied levels of training.
4.The Army has a strict command structure that provides oversight and accountability.
5.The Army has standard issue equipment and vehicles.
6.The Army carefully vets its recruits and all soldier have at least a basic level of training.